Friday 1 May 2020

wrighting

Frozen in an ice cube.


His eyes blinked. They were the only part of his body that he could move:
he was entombed in ice and had been for some time.
The person that had put him here was far away by now.
Glancing around in desperation he tried to move his aching body,
but it was no good - there didn’t seem to be a way out.
Time was slipping away. He had to escape. If he didn’t, then darkness
would cover the world.


There was this person stack on a snowy Mountain and he
started to freeze like an ice cube and then he automatically
got freezed in to a ice cube and he tried really hard to get out
and he could not get out and the only part of his body that could 
movie was his eyes  and I don't know why. 

He was there for over 100 hundred days and he did not die at all and

he wished that he could get out. The next day he went through this really
really dark Forest and did not know what to do as he had never
been there before as he was asleep when he moved that way
and he could not find his way out as he was at the middle of the forest.
He had magic powers to change his clothes so he changed his clothes so
that he had some warm clothes on and then one day if the sun comes out he
will be able to move his whole body then because the sun will melt.

Fanily the next day the sun came out but the ice clube did not melt and

I thought that was a bit strange but anyway given it a couple more days
and it might melt. If it does not melt it must be a no melting ice cube but then
we hear a crack and then a couple more seconds there were more and
more and more and then he fell on to the ground and then he started to
talk and what he said was yea yea yea I am three.

1 comment:

  1. Read your story and check that what you have written is connected to the story starter that I gave you. Remember to think about tense and first and third person.

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