Friday, 27 July 2018

Candy cryistals

In our class we our making candy crystals and I think I will become a crystal because we our going to be eating it and it will probable taste like candy and poping candy I hope it would be dlish and it will take three days to grow and be ready to eat.
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous8 August 2018 at 09:36

    Kia Ora Abbie! I'm your rm 1 WBS. Abbie I liked the way you use cool describing words like ‘dilish’. You taught me that you could make candy crystals and you actually eat them. Next time, you could make sure your work makes sense: for example in our class we OUR.
    From Matai

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  2. Anonymous9 August 2018 at 13:53

    Kia Ora Matai. Thank you for your comment, I appreciate the time you spent to comment back. I do need to remember to re-read my work to make sure it makes sense. Thank you, Abbie.

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.

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