Wednesday 13 March 2019

My poem


3 comments:

  1. Malo Lelei Abbie,
    My name is Dianne and I am a year 7 student at St Pius School, it sounds like you really love pink, my favourite colour is blue.

    I love that you have given flowers to your mother and I think that is so cute. What is your other favourite colour? besides pink.

    Keep up the great work!
    Dianne

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  2. Hello Abbie,
    My name is Laki I am a year 8 student attending Saint Pius X Catholic School. Its sounds like your a nice little girl, that is very generous of you to give your mother pink flowers. I don't really like the colour pink my favourite colours are Blue and Red, besides the colour pink do you like any other colour?

    Great Job!

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  3. Hi Abbie,
    My name is Aaliyah, and I am a year 8 student currently attending St Pius X. I really liked that your poem had a keyword in it, pink. I can tell that you really like the colour. I don’t really understand what kind of poem it is, so it would be great if you could put in your learn.
    Also, thanks for commenting on my blog.

    Good Job!
    Aaliyah

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