Trajun Howdy Abbie I really liked how you used details in your blog I like your lost in the dark the best but your other work is good you need to use less of the word (And) maybe try using also or something I also use the word and alot but I have been trying to use other enthusiastic words to influence the reader do you use next time can you try to use more bigger words. Ok amazing work Ka Kite
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Howdy Abbie I really liked how you used details in your blog I like your lost in the dark the best but your other work is good you need to use less of the word (And) maybe try using also or something I also use the word and alot but I have been trying to use other enthusiastic words to influence the reader do you use next time can you try to use more bigger words. Ok amazing work Ka Kite